High Chieftain King of the South, his Brother, and Nephew take the sacred journey to the Giant's Door only to find ominous ruin. In a fury, they make haste to the Castle of Chalif King.
The mounting sadness for them as they got more excited and closer to their journeys end...
However, "the rune of the royal taxidermist carved tastefully on the far side of both the bones," bugs me. Any rune carved on the bones of a victim who has been harvested, does not strike me as tasteful.
The mounting sadness for them as they got more excited and closer to their journeys end...
However, "the rune of the royal taxidermist carved tastefully on the far side of both the bones," bugs me. Any rune carved on the bones of a victim who has been harvested, does not strike me as tasteful.
Fair. I agree. Different word than "tasteful." Clean? Surgically? Taking suggestions.
I'll read over it again, probably tomorrow, and think it over some more